我儿子上八年级（相当于初中三年级），数学一直不错，但英文感觉不太强。现在疫情之下，孩子的学习非常依赖于父母的辅导，像数学和科学，对我们来说，做孩子的老师，似乎游刃有余。但是英文，对我们来说，本身就是第二语言，语法还懂一些，但是要教孩子写出生动有趣、文采斐然的文章，困难不小。
几天前跟一个纽约的老朋友聊到担心孩子的英文写作，他给我推荐了一个华二代Jane
Chen女士和她的“爱写作中心”。Jane是他朋友的女儿，从小就特别优秀，2014年毕业于哈佛大学，此后从事金融投资行业多年，但是她内心挚爱一直都是写作。2020年初，她跟朋友一起，成立了这个写作中心，以一支哈佛打造的专业团队，来培养4-12年级的学生，提高他们的英文写作能力。
Jane的写作中心的英文名字是Eyre Writing Center，可以简称为EWC。Jane说名字里的“Eyre”是为了表达对“简爱”（Jane
Eyre）这本书的敬意，发音为“
AIR”！她认为，强大的写作能力是成为强大的思想者的基础。清晰的写作和思考能力不仅是通识教育的必要条件，也是我们立足于美国社会所不可或缺的能力。这就是她放弃高薪的华尔街工作，成立这个教育中心的原因。
为了帮助我了解“爱写作中心”和她的学生，Jane介绍了几篇学生写的短文。我读了以后，觉得真心不错，马上把她的email转给我太太，准备给儿子报名参加Eyre
Writing Center。
学生作品：
下面是我觉得不错的三篇针砭时事的英文短文，出自Jane的学生之手，跟大家分享。
Lack of Evidence on Police Reform Programs Proves to be Deadly
By: April Feng
Aug. 6, 2020
In July 2015, criminologist Robin Engel, despite lacking police experience,
became the sole official overseeing the police reform program in Cincinnati
after a shooting. When looking towards research for guidance, she found
herself with few resources to help her.
Near the University of Cincinnati, where Engel taught as a professor, Officer
Ray Tensing, 25, shot and killed musician Samuel DuBose at a traffic stop.
Engel had commonly been called to help police departments manage police
violence, and this time was no different. However, Engel soon found herself as
the leading official in the response to the crisis and establishment of reform
programs.
Attempting to research for any information or studies regarding police
behavior and reform, Engel turned up empty-handed. “I thought most certainly
we would have an evidence base that I could follow,” Engel says. “I was
incredibly disappointed at the lack of evidence that was available. I was
really disappointed in my own field.”
According to Science News, Engel and colleagues discussed the effectiveness of
de-escalation trainings and four other reform programs: “body-worn cameras,
implicit bias training (meant to reduce decisions and actions that arise from
unconscious stereotypes), early intervention systems that identify problematic
officers before a crisis and civilian oversight of the police.” However, there
was close to no evidence pointing any police reform program towards resulting
in an observable behavior change in police officers.
This lack of data comes from many factors, but the main factor lies in “the
pressure for police departments to act fast when an instance of police
violence captures national attention,” says Engel. For instance, the
Minneapolis Police Department was immediately called to be dismantled in
response to demands from activists after the death of George Floyd.
Police research also proves to be difficult due to the fact that “researchers
who conduct the sorts of studies needed to evaluate reforms and police
officials often have different priorities”, according to Science News. A
police chief may not be willing to work with an academic scholar who will
publish reports and may garner significant attention from the press, says Erin
Kerrison, a legal scholar at the University of California, Berkeley.
Money and funding for police research is also fairly limited. While the
National Institute of Health provided $39 billion for research in 2019, the
National Institute of Justice only provided approximately $214 million for the
same cause.
Yet it is clear that a response is needed. Thus, Engel began to conduct her
own study of an implicit bias training program, of which results will be out
later this year. Regarding the challenge of maintaining an ethical
relationship between researchers and police officials, Kerrison published
Police Practice and Research in August 2019 to help with the matter.
It is clear that without research, police responses will default to non
effective solutions that happen to be the quickest. Engel says, “That is a
very dangerous position to be in.”
A Lesson from the Israeli School System?
By: Jonathan Xu
Aug. 10, 2020
In late May of this year, Israel’s daily new coronavirus cases began to drop
from the hundreds to the fifties. Convinced that they had beaten the virus,
the officials were quick to reopen schools on May 17. This crucial mistake led
to a catastrophic outbreak.
Today, the United States is facing a similar situation when it comes to the
critical decision of reopening the education system in-person. Currently, the
situation of the U.S. is far worse than that of Israel when they decided to
reopen. Even so, President Trump is placing immense pressure on school systems
nation-wide by threatening to cut government funding to the school districts
that do not comply with his demands to reopen schools completely.
Experts say that the basic lesson is “that even communities that have gotten
the spread of the virus under control need to take strict precautions when
reopening schools.” Although this is an important point to consider when
eventually reopening schools, I believe that this incident brings about a more
important point to consider. The point being that countries that are still
struggling to fight the pandemic, like the U.S., should not be quick to make
decisions regarding reopenings without careful consideration of the
consequences.
Although it is important for students to receive a full and optimum
educational experience, it just isn’t practical to reopen school in the midst
of a Public Health Emergency such as this outbreak. The political leaders of
Israel have regretted their decision to reopen schools in May strongly, as it
caused a severe surge in coronavirus cases.
By following through with Trump’s early decision to fully reopen schools, we
are putting the national public at unnecessary risk of the coronavirus. It is
the best to sit tight and follow social distancing practices. To do what is
best for the country right now is to prevent this disease from getting out of
hand.
Although it’s not nearly as educational or lively as traditional school,
online school is a healthy alternative to reopening schools at this time. It
is the best decision we can make, until there is a cure and/or vaccine for
the virus.
Chicago Police Arrest More Than 100 People After Looting Batters Downtown
By: Alex Oh
Aug. 14, 2020
Throughout the past weeks, demonstrators have taken the streets of Chicago to
protest the death of George Floyd. In some neighborhoods, the riots have led
to a dramatic increase in gun violence. Now, with more people protesting than
ever, the coronavirus is resurging in the city, “sickening hundreds of people
a day.”
On Monday morning, hundreds of people stormed the Magnificent Mile, a famous
shopping district in Chicago, to protest the police shootings. During the
event, many broke windows, looted stores, and fought with the police, creating
a chaotic scene that eventually forced city officials to raise bridges
downtown and halt all public transit. By the end, two were shot and around 13
police officers were injured. With around 400 police officers at the scene,
more than 100 people were arrested for “disorderly conduct, looting and
battery.”
Despite calls for help during the chaos from some of the members of the
Illinois House, Mayor Lori Lightfoot, a Democrat, stated that there was no
need for military troops to enter the city.
Instead, the mayor expressed frustration and anger for the violence that took
place in the city, immediately ordering limited access to downtown starting
Monday evening.
“We are waking up in shock this morning,” Ms. Lightfoot said at a news
conference. “What occurred downtown and in surrounding communities was abject
criminal behavior, pure and simple.”
The riots have also left businesses that were already struggling from the
coronavirus in even worse shape. Since the spread of the pandemic in spring,
downtown Chicago has been like a ghost town without its large number of
tourists. Now, many of the stores that these tourists used to visit have been
vandalized, destroyed, and left in shambles. According to The New York Times,
the events have left many Chicagoans “shaken.”
“These last few months have been tremendously difficult for a lot of people,”
the Rev. Corey Brooks, a pastor on Chicago’s South Side, said. “People are
hurting financially, emotionally and psychologically. There’s a lot of
suffering going on. What happened last night sets us back even more.”
更多学生文章，请查看：
https://www.ewcjournal.com/
另外，Jane还给我们读者提供了她推荐的Reading List，在这里：
https://www.eyrewritingcenter.com/blog/categories/reading-lists
写作比赛：
除了这些短文，我在Eyre Writing
Center的网站上还看到中心正在组织作文比赛，9月底截稿，有三个$250大奖等你拿，相信很多家长会感兴趣让孩子参加。请赶快到下面的网站去报名（点击文末”阅读原文“链接直接进入）。
https://www.eyrewritingcenter.com/essaycontest
课程安排：
“爱写作中心”网站和已有的宣传材料都是英文的，为了帮助我们的读者了解她的中心，Jane特意为我们准备了中文版课程介绍如下。请根据孩子的年龄安排参加9月5日和8日的4节免费公开课，帮你和孩子进一步了解Eyre
Writing Center，为提高孩子的写作水平和能力，跨出关键的第一步。
公益活动：
”爱写作中心“与美国亚太联盟有很多合作和相互支持。下面是去年Jane在亚太联盟做的讲座活动的总结（英文）：
Below is a summary of the well received APAPA seminar presented by Jane in
2019.—-“Writing,” E.B. White once said, “is an act of faith, not a trick of
grammar.”That is probably among the last things a high school student writing
his college application needs to hear. Your typical junior is knee-high in
books, juggling his extracurricular activities with community service
requirements, knocking on the doors of teachers for recommendations, ripping
through practice SAT tests … and you want me to view the college application
as a spiritual exercise?
Instead, let us start with this ubiquitous fact: that acceptance into
selective colleges is harder than ever before. Today, Harvard and Stanford
rejected nearly 95% of all students who apply compared an acceptance rate of
13.5% for the incoming class of 1997. This of course, led to an educational
“arms race”.
But somewhere in this arms race, the student becomes lost – and that is where
this seminar comes in: to debunk the myths surrounding the application process
to some of the most selective schools in the U.S. On April 27th, APAPA hosted
an event with a panel of both parents and students who have gone through this
very process, followed by a presentation deconstructing the personal
statement. As each panelist shared his and her experiences, several clear
themes emerge: that the application is not some robotic process where the
student ticks off items on some arbitrary checklist to impress a stuffy
committee; that colleges are looking for someone who cares about the community
and can better the society in which we live; that “the fire” has to burn from
within.The last is an especially interesting concept for those from an Asian
background. Too often, there is the image of a “Tiger Mom”-type figure who
would scold when her child brings back a B or when he hits the wrong key
during a piano recital. But as evidenced by the parents whose children went
off to elite institutions such as Stanford, Columbia, Penn, and Dartmouth, the
far better approach is to help the child find his or her passion and nurture
it. In this way, parents set children up not just for the high schools years –
but for life.
The presentation that followed was given by a Harvard graduate who spent
years reviewing and editing the personal statement of the college application.
There is no practical way for members of an admission committee to come close
to truly knowing the child in a two-minute review of the application, but the
essay is the only window into the child’s personality. One would be surprised
at how much a piece of writing can say about someone. Diction and syntax play
a specific tone; a writer composes it into a melody. It’s a fine line – Is
your tone assertive? (That’s good.) Overly assertive? (That’s not good.)
It was a lot of information packed in three hours, but rich with advice from
the experiences of those who have gone through them before. It was a
phenomenal event that APAPA put together, and if it helped guide any one child
in the audience to find his passion and view the college application process
as an extension of a lifetime of learning, then we would have more than done
our job.
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Ohio 、OCAA和其他亚裔团体的活动，促进亚裔社区对美国社会、政治、文化、体育、艺术、教育、法律等的了解。APAPA的全名是Asian Pacific
Islander American Public Affairs Association
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